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I love you,
He says, I love you.
He says I love you a lot.
He says I love you; a lot of what
he says is crap. I love you a lot (of what
he says is crap, I love you is not). A lot of what
he says she says is crap. I love you is not a lot of what
either thought it would be.
©2006-2009 ~CreativeFlair
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A Matryoshka doll is one of those russian things, where you have a little doll inside a small doll, the small doll inside an average doll, an average doll inside a larger doll and etc.


So. This is just . . . an experiment.

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:iconaranelmorwen:
Wow. This is so awesome.
I want to do a poem with this kind of form now!
:iconcreativeflair:
Thanks! I'm not so sure I like it, but it was interesting and a little fun to try and work a poem continually to get so many meanings out of so few words!

Good luck with your bash at it =)

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Decorated./Matryoshka
:iconspamuel:
a fantastic idea! melikes alot. i wanna fav it. but i wanna be very picky with my favs. i might come back and fav it later.

maybe you should mess with it a bit more? but i cant think of how. sorry im not being very helpful. :confused:

speaksoon anyway :wave:

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The Moving Finger writes, and, having writ,
Moves on; nor all your Piety nor Wit
Shall lure it back to cancel half a Line,
Nor all your Tears blot out a Word of it.
:iconcreativeflair:
Heyyy! Thanks! I think its ok. I like the concept a lot more than the outcome!

You needn't fave it. It isn't anything special. And I can't be arsed to fiddle with it. I'll just make up a different one =D

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Decorated./Matryoshka
:iconbertblack:
I adore this. My mind is going in ever expanding spirals now.

:D

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