I love you,
He says, I love you.
He says I love you a lot.
He says I love you; a lot of what
he says is crap. I love you a lot (of what
he says is crap, I love you is not). A lot of what
he says she says is crap. I love you is not a lot of what
either thought it would be.














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I want to do a poem with this kind of form now!
Good luck with your bash at it
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Decorated./Matryoshka
maybe you should mess with it a bit more? but i cant think of how. sorry im not being very helpful.
speaksoon anyway
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The Moving Finger writes, and, having writ,
Moves on; nor all your Piety nor Wit
Shall lure it back to cancel half a Line,
Nor all your Tears blot out a Word of it.
You needn't fave it. It isn't anything special. And I can't be arsed to fiddle with it. I'll just make up a different one
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Decorated./Matryoshka
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